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my story
well there was this guy and his buddies hangin around town and they were getting drunk breaking the law in a lot of diferent ways. the cops came and one of the the guys tryed to run, he tripped on a vine in the middle of the woods... he started to hear noises.... he thought it was just becuz he was drunk... once he got out of the woods he ended up in japan (he started in indiana) he was scared. he screamed and screamed all night then... he heard the noises closer! so he started running for his life then he turned the corner and.......
to be continued
- by i rock yur wirld |
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- | Submitted on 07/07/2009 |
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- Title: my story
- Artist: i rock yur wirld
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- Date: 07/07/2009
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- bunniluvva - 07/10/2009
- ok, it's a good plot!
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- xxneonxnightxlifexx - 07/08/2009
- its a really good concept!! maybe take out a few "so"s and dont start with well. add some more discription too. make it so that the reader can picture it in their mind. im sure it will be great!!
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