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Prologue
“I'm sorry that I haven't been myself lately, but... I can't say it... You won’t believe me… this paranormal… never mind.”
I can’t sleep thanks to those words. They keep repeating themselves over and over again in my head. Over and over and over and over and...
What was he going to say?
This paranormal what?
“I'll tell you later. Bye...”
And then he was gone. No sound was left but the ticking of the clock and a dead line at the other end of the phone.
Dead.
That's what he seemed like recently - dead. hollow. Full and complete on the outside, but dark, broken and lonely inside.
Dead on the inside.
He tried his best to hide it, he did. Had everyone fooled. Had everyone believing he was fine.
Everyone but me, anyway.
No, I knew something was up, and I’d get it out of him, even if I died trying to find out. Even if lies were much easier to believe; Even if not knowing was better; even if not knowing saved both our lives…
*** More comming soon, perhaps. Comment and tell me if i should contine ***
- by ThisIsMyDeathbed_x |
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- | Submitted on 07/17/2009 |
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- Title: Dead On The Inside (prologue)
- Artist: ThisIsMyDeathbed_x
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Description:
Story of a boy with a supernatural power... What could it be? All will be revealed soon =)
In the prologue, the best friend of Nick Rush (Eva Langford) is coming to the decision to interrogate Nick, and discover his dark secret... Even if she dies finding out.
Plz comment and tell me whether you think i should continue on with the story, or if it'll be a waste of time =) - Date: 07/17/2009
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Comments (4 Comments)
- gurra991 - 08/16/2009
- It´s awesome I wish to read on so please oh pretty please continue!!
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- ZanpaktoRule - 08/14/2009
- Oh yes, do continue! This is wonderful, and really grabs ones attention!
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- Jacobstorm27 - 07/25/2009
- Awesome and suspenseful
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- SgtFunShineBear - 07/17/2009
- continue plz. im writing a diffrent story of a boy with a supernatural power so plz read and comment (that goes for everyone) keep writing!!
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