Give me a reason

• Artist: iifuzzypanda
• Description: sad depression and plz give good rate an comments thank you!
• Date: 07/24/2009
• Tags: give reason

I fall to my knees as my heart begins to bleed. Tears fall from my eyes.
Was it ever enough or was it all just too much? Have I finally paid the price?
I feel like I�m being torn from the inside. I want to rip it all away.
I feel like your slowly killing me for the last time. How much will you take from me?
What do you expect to see? What do you want from me?
So now I�m on my knees, taking in my misery.
When will it all be done? Tonight I cry tears blood.
I fear I said too much the night I said it was you I love.
I feel all the love is only on one side. So I gently kiss your lips and ask Where do we stand tonight?
Nothing seems to feel right. I want to say the hell with life.
Take off in to the night and find a place to wait to die.
Cause if I am forced to be with out you.
I can�t imagine a worse way for me to loose.
So give me just one reason why I should continue.
Cause it all seems so hard to do.

Comments

[invaderalice333]

its alright, you might want to try not squeezing as many cliches as possible into your work next time you write something. try more of a structure, it will make the poem easier to read, split a phrase into two lines there doesn't have to be a period at the end of each.

[Suicide Blondie]

yea u seem to like alot of question marks

[little-ms-dramatic]

aww! it's a beautiful story but what's with the question marks?