- Running through the forest. I hear them. They are catching up to me. I have no where else to go. Of coarse they can hear my footsteps crunching on the fallen leaves because I can hear theirs loud and clear. I just have to keep running. I know what they want but I am never going to give it to them. My mom told me stories when I was little that these...people if they can even be considered as that, liked to get what they want no matter what happened or who got hurt...or worse. That was what happened to my mom. She got the worst of it...she got turned into one of them. That to her is even worse than death. Now she is the one chasing me. They want the key that i keep around my neck, except today I couldn`t risk that so I put it on my cat`s collar. They still have not figured that out though. They are chasing me and I don`t have enough time to explain why they want it. I have to hide now before they get me. DAMNIT! Why the hell did I have to run into the forest. I am wearing a brown jacket. Maybe if I went behind that big tree i would blend in..yes That would be perfect.....
- by xXkar568Xx |
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- | Submitted on 07/26/2009 |
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- Title: A Cold, Cold August Night
- Artist: xXkar568Xx
- Description: Well I felt bad because my friends sister died... so i wrote a story about another girl that I am making up on the spot. I don`t like writing really... I don`t even think I am good at it soo...yeah.
- Date: 07/26/2009
- Tags: cold august death cassiashae sadness
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Comments (4 Comments)
- LOL Chubby Rainbow LOL - 08/09/2009
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Wow this is amazing. This is the first post I have read today with no technical errors. wait hold on I take that back. You are missing some quotes. So either add quotes or add something to let everyone know she is thinking it and not saying it. Some people probably won't notice, but I did. I love it four out of five for the quotes. You made my day for not having any spelling errors.
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- romalokp4 - 08/08/2009
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i think it is pretty good
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- crazyzalaxgirl - 07/30/2009
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its not bad for not being finished.
i like it.
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- xXkar568Xx - 07/26/2009
- I know it is short but i will continue it later. I am leaving this friday. I will try to put the next part before that.
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