Innocent Tears

• Artist: kyriaomi
• Description: It's a story in progress..... I need to know if I should continue it, so PLEASE COMMENT!!!!!!!
• Date: 07/30/2009
• Tags: innocent tears zombie undead

HEY!!!!! Read the Descripion first!!!


To: The Entire Human Race
From: Nicole Krosse
Subject: NEWS FROM THE ABOVEGROUND!!!!! DO NOT ERASE!

First off, sorry to use the virus e-mail, but this is the only way the world will know the truth of whats happening up here.
Anyways, the year is 2031, and don't you dare say otherwise. I've been living where I can see the sun, where I can count the days. You guys, not so much. After the majority of the people left to live underground to escape, you lost the way to count time. I bet you've tried to forget what has happened, what is still happening....
The Zombies.
One bite, that's all it takes to change into one. But is there a way back? Only 5% of the population remained above ground while you fled, but now I fear that even 1% doesn't even remain. But I believe some can be changed back.
How? I don't know. But then you must think i'm crazy. How can I believe it? Because I was one. One of them. One of the Undead. But I'm not anymore, and I'm determined to find out why. And my story will be known....

Comments

[kyriaomi]

Just trying to give excuses for my poor grammer! smile I'm a very stubborn person who hates to be critically judged by others! LOL, this is the worst place for me to be! Although it is true, my favorite suject is Pre-cal, and I abolutely hate english....

[JohnLeprechaun]

So why are you writing? If you don't like writing, then don't go out of your way. I'm not saying that this wouldn't be a good idea, or even that you did a bad job with the first part, but if it's a chore for you, then I don't know why you would even start.

[jiny11]

you should continue what you start. at least you put your ideas out there

[kyriaomi]

Umm, the reason it kind of devoid of any defining details is because i don't want poeple to steal my ideas just yet. And since all my stories spawn from dreams, there is a HUGE defining difference between this story and all otheers. Thirdly, I am a math and science person. I'd rather be writing some huge program in Java than write an essay, so cut me some slack..... What the heck is resident evil?

[BookWurm21]

it reminds me of resident evil...

[Purple-shoes616]

Well i like it near the end
but if you were to continue it you need to make it a little less cliche
it seems a little unoriginal
i would think that as a writer, you would want you work to stand out from the 9057987586546878474753784578454875 zombie stories out there
also a few grammar errors