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Speedy koshiwaThe moon shown brilliantly onto the Crystal clear water illuminating a school of silver fish .
The sound of an ocarina playing a sad tune was being carried by a cool ocean breeze ,along with the sounds of crickets played along to the ocarina . It seemed to be another night in the forest village of Quarin one of the most peaceful nights it had in centuries .
" Over there there's another one " shouted one of Desin's Foot soldiers merrily.
(( uh,, i am going to have to lead them away from the village again )) I thought to my self as I placed my ocarina down and got off of the tree branch i was sitting on .I jumped off of the tree and onto the leaf cover ground . I followed the sounds of the soldiers until i spotted one group close the Samantha's hide out ...Too close . I walked far behind the group slowly and began to plan out how i would trick them into believing the village was in the other direction .
But . me being myself and anyone how knows me knows I am clumsy ... and my foot landed in a Rabbit vine trap that Samantha made three weeks ago . It quickly slung me up into the air and i hung there upside down , better yet i alerted the soldiers. Yep caught again sweatdrop
" Hey here's one !" a tall solider stated . and then he gabbed me in the side with a stick picked up off the ground .I snapped at him..well the stick mostly stare ." feisty she is " a short solider smiled. The third solider a tall brawny one grabbed my hair " her hair is soft wonder what she stole to get her hair this soft ." I growled at him darkly .No one touched my hair NO ONE ! stressed
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- | Submitted on 08/01/2009 |
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- Title: Dark moon
- Artist: Serinity kennedy
- Description: a story i am writing
- Date: 08/01/2009
- Tags: dark moon
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Comments (2 Comments)
- BookishSnowWhite - 05/21/2011
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Mmm... It reads like is will be really great. But it's really informal. If you writing this for the sake of writing, keep it up. But if you ever want to be taken serious or published, you need to work much harder.
Best of luck!
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- D3a7h_G0d - 09/10/2009
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cool
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