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I was walking in an ally after midnight. I notice a person at the end of the ally. Suddenly, they disappeared. They literally disappeared into the shadows. Then I found myself surrounded by these shadow creatures. The shadow creatures were about to jump and attack me, when someone in a black cloak destroyed them. I couldn't see their face. Although, I did notice it was a girl. When I tried to thank her, she just stabbed a huge sword into the ground and vanished. I walked towards the sword when suddenly, a figure appeared and pulled the sword out of the ground. He faced me and positioned himself to fight me. I picked up the nearest thing(which was a trash can) to fight the mysterious man. I stared at the mysterious man, holding the trash can in my hand, while he was staring at me, holding that giant sword. Then he charged at me. He tried to slash me, but I managed to dodge him. After that, I whacked him with the trash can. It didn't do much. I tried again. This time, he slashed the trash can in two. Now I was defenseless. The mysterious man kept trying to slash me, but I kept dodging him. Then he punched me in the stomach. I was stunned, but I managed to dodge his next attack. Then the man tried to stab me. He missed and the sword got stuck in the wall. Now I had a chance to hit him. I used all my might to hurt him, but nothing worked. Then I tried to pull the sword out of the wall. The thing was so heavy. I didn't know the man could even swing it at me. Then the man noticed me trying to pull the sword. He punched me away and pulled the sword out. I got up, but he kicked me back down. Then he tried to stab me again. I managed to dodge it and he stabbed the ground. I backed up and I noticed he was being shocked. I saw red electricity around his chest shocking him. Then before I know, he was gone. I walked towards the sword and I grabbed the handle. Then I felt being shocked. After five seconds of being shocked, I pulled the sword out. I was amazed. I swung it around a bit. Then I heard clapping. I looked around and said,"Who goes there?"
I looked around and I saw two hands clapping. Then I saw the craziest thing happen. I saw a man wearing a black and white mask and a giant hour glass on his back appear clapping his hands. The man said while clapping,"Well done my boy. Well done."
I asked,"Who are you?"
He said while he grabbed a hat that just appeared on his head,"My name is Mr.IDK and I know a thing or two about that sword you have there."
I said,"Oh yeah? and what would that be?"
Mr.IDK said,"That sword belonged to a great warrior long ago. He used that sword to fight in wars and fight evil. It is that sword that belonged to Undertaker Armageddon! And now you hold it in your hands. It in a matter of time his memories will come to you and you become the new Undertaker."
Before I could say anything Mr.IDK was gone. I thought it over. I did remember seeing a girl in a hood at the circus. I said to myself," Yeah that's right. She was there in the crowd and spying on me while we were putting the tents away."
I had a flashback of the circus. Doink the Clown was doing what he did best, doinking around. I noticed her leave right before it was my turn to perform. I was the guy everyone came to see. Today, I was going to stand on a giant stick, back flip off, and light it on fire while falling. I did so and the crowd was amazed. While me Doink were putting away the main tent, I notice her in the distance. I asked Doink," Hey Doink, do you see that girl over there?"
Doink looked and honked his nose in saying no.
After I tried to think who she was, I tried looking for her. First, I went to ask Moira at the Durem Depot. Luckily I caught while she was closing up. I asked her," Hey Moira, have you seen a girl with red long hair and in a black coat?"
Moira said,"No sorry, Gangrel. Hey nice performance at the circus."
"You saw it?", I asked.
She said,"No, but Ian and Rufus told me all about it. Hey can you say hi to Doink for me? He's one of my favorite performers."
I said," I will."
I left and was on my way to the Barton Boutique to ask Ian and Rufus if they have seen the mysterious lady. Once I reached the gate, it was locked. I tried knocking, pushing, and asking them to open it. Nothing worked. Then I remember about my new sword. I pulled it out and I heard a voice behind say,"Yoo hoo! There's no need to violence, circus boy."
I ignored the man I positioned myself. Then the man rushed in front of me and I saw it was Mr.IDK. He said," Oh wait, wait, wait, wait, wait. You should listen to what others say lad, he turned around and said," This door is very sturdy, he banged on it and continued," Your tricks will do no good, he turned backed to me and said," NO GOOD!"
I pointed my sword at his face and said,"Zip it or I'll break that mask of your's."
He said,"That could be a problem, he moved next to me and said," Just hear me out. You have nothing to lose, right?"
I said,"Y-yeah. I don't know."
Mr.IDK said,"Well then let's find out. You see, the people behind this door are scared of a monster. You defeat it and they might let you in."
I asked,"Then where is this monster?"
Mr.IDK pointed to the open field and said," Right there."
Suddenly, a giant monster appeared in the field. It looked like a cerberus. Mr.IDK said,"Good luck." Then he laughed and disappeared.
- by Joko-BiLuis Armageddon |
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- | Submitted on 08/07/2009 |
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- Title: Redemption of Undertaker pt.1
- Artist: Joko-BiLuis Armageddon
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Description:
I know this is a first-person story, but it was originally a journal story, but the making of it just urged me to make it like this.
- Date: 08/07/2009
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Comments (1 Comments)
- shado3moon - 08/07/2009
- it sounds like a lot of your ideas were coming from the game "kingdom hearts." - ya know - the shadowy creatures and the people with the black hoods... i know this is your first journal-story thingy, but you should try to come up with original ideas - like the circus part. go more into depth about that. it kinda confused me how it jumped from topic to topic like that, but otherwise,if you make clever connections in your piece and think outside the normal, you might find your story...
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