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Anne and Creg were together for 2nd grade to now 12th grade.
Creg went walked over to his girlfriend, Anne's house
*knocked door*
Anne: Creg? What are you doing here?
Creg: Anne...
Anne: Come in, Creg.
Creg: Look Anne. I was planned picked your mom up, but they told me that your
mom is died by shotgun...
Anne: What?! Why they shot her? *crying*
Creg: I saw them at hotel.. That man said to her, he said.. " Give me your money and I will kidnap your daughter." Then your mom said.. "No, you doesn't even know my daughter." He shot her.
Anne: Do You know what he look like? Let call a cop.
Creg: No, we can't call a cop, we will go to my uncle Carl, He is a cop.
Creg: Well I am going to my uncle Carl now, I'll explain him about everything okay?
Anne: Alright, I love you and I'll be safe here.
Creg: I love you too, If you need anything call me.
*Creg left*
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*In the morning*
*Ringing*
Uncle Carl: Hello?
Anne: Carl! Where is Creg?
Uncle Carl: He was went to your house about 20 mins ago, did you see him in the outside?
Anne: Nope.
Uncle Carl: Oh, go looking for him. Be safe with your friend okay?
Anne: Okay, sir!
*hung up the phone*
Anne and her friend are walking around city. Now at 10:30am, She found Creg on the ground."
Anne: CREG!! ARE YOU OKAY?!, HELP! PEOPLE!
She took him at the hospital.
Anne: Is he alright?
Doctor: Well I have to tell you something..
Anne: What is it?
Doctor: He is died, we found a shot inside his chest.
Doctor: I am sorry.
Anne: *crying*
Uncle Carl: Hey what going on, Anne?
Anne: Creg is died...
Uncle Carl: What?! Creg...
Anne: *crying*
Uncle Carl: Come here, Anne.
They hugged. Her boyfriend Creg, he is died by same man to shot like Anne's mother. Then Anne is with Uncle Carl's house for while. Anne's father is coming back, and keep safe with her father.
She still can feel Creg touch her arm. It was like "I love you"
- by PrincessMiYee |
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- | Submitted on 08/16/2009 |
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- Title: Creg got shotgun.
- Artist: PrincessMiYee
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Description:
Longo long ago, my friend and I was talked about sad thing like animals or people died, it made me had an idea for it.
That's my old story last 2007 on deviantart. - Date: 08/16/2009
- Tags: creg shotgun
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- Kitsunefox1986 - 06/30/2015
- Decent story, more of a play/movie. Need to work on grammer
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