the princess

• Artist: neko83oken
• Description:
• Date: 09/05/2009
• Tags: princess

once upon a time there was princess named vannah. she just turned 13 when she found out that she and her best friend were the chosen ones. along with 4 other people.The team was made up of vannah was fire,ash was air ,broke was earth ,mae was water ,then the warriors were jade the girl, and van the boy. but one day a bad man came and planned to take over the is land as his own. and to take the power away from vannah parents.what will happen next time.
the end
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by vannahmae333

Comments

[akbar228]

sounds interesting but elaborate a bit more

[Warewing]

ok, but spelling is not, next time type in microsoft word copy it to here and it should turn out ok, 3/5

[xGaryGlitterx]

i lol'd, this isnt a serious entry right?

[Sweet Goddess Hecate]

let me know when you write more to this story, ok?

[Ushama]

I'd work on spelling bur overall interesting idea's... 3/5