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Jackie sat wile thinking to him self, then to his surprise a GIANT piece of bird crap landed on his forhead. He sprang up off the bench "AH, MOTHER F......" Jackie paused...... then stared at the sky. He was not alone, infact evry one who was at Dawson park that day stood and stared at the masive purple cloud forming over Dawson Lake.
There was a loud clap of thunder and then a light rumble to follow. Twentyfive people stared and sixteen took photos and pictures of this rare phanomonon. It started raining heavily as everyone rushed for cover. Jackie stood under the tree, clothes drenched and everything. People were shoving and squrming for cover........and then everyone's movement stoped. They all stared in the same direction of the blinding ray of light forming through the purple-blackish cloud. They all stood in amazment, some still in the rain. This magnificent light of warmth was so bright that each and every camera or cell phone's screen went blank. People who had been taking a photo had nothing to photograph.
It almost seemed like an instant when the white light disapered. All that was seen, was the giant cloud, and......a huge riple in the water. This riple could be mistaken as a wave, it stood 12 feet. It was headed in all directions at an alarming rate. Everybody ran for cover once again, shoving one another. Jackie stood and saw what apeared to be a person KNEALING on the riple. He was shocked, such a thing would be imposible!!!! People saw him, out in the open, just standing there...time was not on their side, so all they could do was yell! "KID!!KID!!!!!!!!!!" they all yelled indivisualy, one women screamed scream then pointed "AAAAAAHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!". It was too late, the wave/riple already colided with the Park along with Jackie.
- Title: SATALITE :Chapter 2 (satalite)
- Artist: Jackie47
- Description: this little chapter will explain y i gave this name to my story.
- Date: 09/14/2009
- Tags: satalite chapter satalite
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