chap 1: The Mystery of Camilla

• Artist: Desired Cosplay
• Description: This is a story of a girl who mysteriously disapears, so 2 children try to find their lost sister, where they find alot more than clues toward the case of Camilla Vendeta.....Will they find their lost sister? Or will they become lost? Read to find out more!
• Date: 09/17/2009
• Tags: mystery crime awesome camilla

It was a Thursday morning.....And Camilla Vendeta was gone. She disapeared late last night, and no clues were found. All though she was a orphan, and she was mentally challenged, she had a really good reason to leave. But we will get to that later....The 2 children that were looking hard for their sister were Tanya Vendeta and her little sister Violet Vendeta. They were right now looking for their sister in the Bumbaii Forest in North Africa..........

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"Come on Violet, we don't need to be playing around at a time like this." Tanya said quietly. "Mmmkay...." said Violet. Her short blonde hair billowed in the breezy wind. The Willow trees shook silently as Violet and Tanya paced deeper into the jungle. There ripped coths for clothes were catching on every branch that they came across. "Look! Violet! Look!" Tanya called. She was pointing at footprints in the dark mud.

Comments

[Pikku Prinssi]

Vendeta? Really? I was a little turned off by that. This doesn't seem too bad, although there isn't much to go by. This chapter is pretty short smile

[Desired Cosplay]

Please Comment!!!! Also leave some suggestions for chapter 2!!