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boy called the girl on cellphone(not saying names)and said:Where were you?you werent at school?
girl:im...not feeling well
boy:well when are you coming back?
girl:i promise i'll be there tommorow
boy:alright hope you get better
girl:.....
The girl did not go to school.
Boy talking to his friend:Hey have you seen _____ around?
Friend:No I didnt see her.Why?
Boy: ohhh....it's nothing
Later that night the boy called the girl
boy:Where were you?Are you okay?
girl:Yeah it's just...........*girl sounds like she's been crying*
boy:*sounding worried*Where are you?Are you okay?
Girl:Would you die for me?
Boy:Yes*sounds more worried*
Girl:Would you take a bullet for me?
Boy: Of course! whats wrong?!?!?!
girl:.....i think we need to break up
boy:.........What?Why?!
girl:............
She hanged up on the despaired boy and cryed herself to sleep
At school the friend was talking to the boy
Boy:Have you seen ______ around?
Friend:No but i know she's at a hospital.
Boy:....What?WHAT?!
Friend:Room 13
Boy:how do you know?
Friend:*gives him a phone number*heres thier number
Boy:.................thanks
Later that night the boy called the hospital
Boy:exsuse me but is _____ ______ staying there
Recpitionist:Yes her room is number 13 visting hours are 5-7p.m
Boy:I just want to talk to her!
Recptionist:Im sorry but you have to vist her.She can't talk on the phone now
Boy:.....O.k
Tommorow the boy visted the girl and see's her in bed looking very sick
Boy:_____?Is that you?Why are you here?
Girl:_____?What are you doing here?
Boy:I asked first
Girl:*chuckles*just like you to say that
Boy:______What are you doing here?
Girl:.............I have cancer
boy:.............What?
The recipitionist came in for visting hours are over.The boy was depressed and didn't contact the girl again.
A couple weeks later they released the girl,but she died 2 weeks later.
At school the boy talked to his friend.
Friend: Did you hear about ____?
Boy:No what?*he looked nervous*
Friend:She died.
Boy:What?What?!WHAT?!
Friend:*Looks scared*S-she d-died two days a-ago
The boy ran away some where.They found him in an abonded warehouse with a bullet through his heart.There was a note by the gun.
Dear ____,
I told you I would take a bullet for you.
I love you with all my heart
XOXOXOXOXOLove with all my heart,____
The boy was buried next to the girl and lived happily together in the afterlife.
THE END
- by ShiekXtheXgreatXFilipina |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 09/25/2009 |
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- Title: I would die for you
- Artist: ShiekXtheXgreatXFilipina
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About a boy who is in love with a girl who got cancer.read it plz!
My first post so plz be nice!it's actually based an a true story. - Date: 09/25/2009
- Tags: love killed togther
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Comments (6 Comments)
- maydaymouse - 04/09/2010
- I like the idea for the story, it was bittersweet. But I agree that there should have been names, and check for spelling and grammar errors. But for a first post it was good, so a 4/5. Keep writing.
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- AnimentalCosplayer - 10/26/2009
- It's very good
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- ShiekXtheXgreatXFilipina - 09/26/2009
- thx i couldnt think of names>.<go figure
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- iilovecookies-xoxo - 09/25/2009
- It's a very good story, and reallly sad. I'll give you a 4/5 for not putting their names, it messes it up. But anyways, I LOVED IT!!!
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- invisibleninja159 - 09/25/2009
- AWWWEEEE
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