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CHAPTER 1
THE BEGGING OF THE WAR
"Hello were am I?" A girl asked "were is it?" A voice said "I....I wont say!" "THEN PERISH MY WRATH!!" A light came from the sky going right for the girl. "I am queen of my country and as long as its safe nothing can go wrong the light will win!" She said. the light hit her making her knock out.
knock knock "Come in please don't be a stranger." the person knocks down the door "do you hear of manners i said i was coming!" "you told me to come in I thought?" "its OK son no need to worry." this is my gram pa he says one thing and hell change his mind like that SNAP. "did you hear in the court yard there's a..." i said "spit it out son!" i thought to myself should i tell him or should i not.
I took my hat and ran out the door. "geez that kid has it in for him." i got into the towns court yard and took the baby lizard. "get that boy!! he took it were all dead!" comets were flying of the sky hitting our country i ran back home the comet hit the house be for i got there "gram pa!!" a man ran down the street for me i turned around and i was to late he jumped for me landed on the ground and got my leg. "let me go!" i said "let me go with you.! i can teach you things." he said "fine just this once thought."
CHAPTER TWO
THE CRASS OF A LIFE TIME
- by maxattackfroggy |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 10/06/2009 |
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- Title: A LIZARD OF ARE TIME
- Artist: maxattackfroggy
- Description: a boy 16 years old has found a rare lizard he must learn how to fight and use magic and defend himself chapter two will come out soon
- Date: 10/06/2009
- Tags: lizard time
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Comments (2 Comments)
- I The Author I - 12/17/2009
- Ok.......? Just like AkamaruFang said, there are ALOT of grammar mistakes. I can't even understand the story....
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- Kayard - 10/09/2009
- A lot of spelling and grammar mistakes 2/5
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