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"LILLY! HURRY UP!" said danie, "FIRST YOU ARRIVE LATE, AND NOW YOUR RUNNING LATE FOR OUR FIRST CLASS OF THE SEMESTER!". Lilly quickly snatched her book bag and ran out the dorm room. After a long day of hard work, lilly finished her studies, and went to sleep. Danie on the other hand for some odd reason, couldn't sleep.
She walked aimlessly around the room, and finally stumbled into the bathroom. Danie suddenly tripped on the bathroom rug and fell into the edge of the bathtub. Blood trinkled down the side of her face, as her unconsious body fell to the floor. "Lill....." Danie managed to say.
It was finally morning and Lilly was wide awake. On routine she walked into the bathroom and was caught off guard by the sight of Danie's bloodied body. "HELP! SOMEONE HELP!" Lilly screamed. The dorm assistent ran in to see the crime scene of the college. "oh this is bad....." said the dorm assistent as she walked off to the main office.
The police arrived at about 1:34 to investigate the body. "There really apears to be no evident source of death, so we will need to take the body into our lab for further investigation." said the chief of police. Lilly tried to keep her mind off of Danie, her long gone dorm partner.
" I don't know what to make of this, why on earth would she just stumble into the bathroom at midnight for no apearent reason?!" said laura jean. "I think we should perform an autopsy, Danie may have, I don't know, breathed in something she wasn't mean't to." Laura explained. "Or, maybe it was something someone else wanted her to breathe in." said Laura's partner jake.
Laura smiled. " Oh you always think murder!"
It took 3 hours but Laura and Jake finally found the evedence they were searching for. "Just as i suspected," Laura started " there's Carbon Monoxide left in her lungs." Jake studdered, "wait, does that mean that she killed herself, or did someone poison her?" Once again, Laura smirked. " you do always think murder, but this time, i think I agree." TO BE CONTINUED.......
- Title: dorm disaster
- Artist: kebbablue
- Description: Lilly finally arrived at Ohio State University for her perfect year with her best friend, or so she thought....
- Date: 11/11/2009
- Tags: dorm disaster lilly danie carbonmonoxide
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- cookiemnster12345 - 12/22/2009
- finish it its really good i give 5/5 =D
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