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i wake up out of a deep sleep.
i try to move but i cannot.
i try to talk, but my lips don't move.
i look down to the end of the bed, there is a figure. a dark mass with glowing red eyes.
i hovers over the bed and my mouth opens.
look to my left and my boyfriend has woken up, the dark mass dimishes, along with me not being able to move.
i sit straight up and scream. this makes my boyfriend jump. he bolts upright too.
"what is lee?whats the matter?" he starts to rub my back.
"nothing,nothing." i say "just a bad dream."
"Are you sure?" he asks "do you need anything?"
"no,no im fine." i say, i'm not fine at all. But i do not want to worry him.
i lie back down, and he falls over with a thump back onto the bed.
i'm afraid to go back to sleep, what if it comes for me? what will happen to me?
soon tiredness takes over and my eyes close.
My dreams are full of this dark mass. I wake up again from this bad dream. i'm hypervetlating i try to calm down but i can't. i go to get up but i don't move.
i open my eyes fully and above me is the dark mass, it looks more like a demon now, eyes glowing red, big wings and horns.
my mouth opens again and it turns to a mist.
it floats into my mouth.
then the pain starts.
it comes out of my back. i try to scream but i can't.
i then float out of my body. i look down at myself. i see a light, but i can't go into it.
then it occurs to me, i'm not dead. i have been possesed.
i look down at myself. my eyes are fully open but are red. This thing is beside my boyfriend!
i have to get back into my body, before it hurts my loved ones...
- by Limited Pleasure |
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- | Submitted on 02/16/2010 |
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- Title: Taken by darkness
- Artist: Limited Pleasure
- Description: this is about a 19 year old girl named lee who gets possessed by a demon, or is it the devil? this is chapter one, im writing it back and forth between boyfriend and lee. enjoy this piece i hope you like it.
- Date: 02/16/2010
- Tags: floating
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- Crumpet the Tea - 02/18/2010
- All the 'i's need to be capitalized. Good though. Keep writing.
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