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You bark
You growl
You've put up a fight
But now your gone
Out of my sight
You were loyal and always by my side
But then you ran away to some other guy
My Unloyal Dog
- by Maemi_Irie |
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- | Submitted on 03/08/2010 |
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- Title: The Unloyal Dog
- Artist: Maemi_Irie
- Description: Just a poem i made in poetry class hehe hope u enjoy it ^^ (btw might sound kind of kiddish but thats what makes it silly lol)
- Date: 03/08/2010
- Tags: friend dogs unloyal
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Comments (6 Comments)
- Music4Ever22 - 10/17/2011
- This is a poem..and makes no sense. I'm sorry.
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- RiikoxSoushi - 05/25/2010
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Very funny. You put a smile on my face.
But my advice to you is to let your gaurd down, in your writing I can tell you probably get defensive to some things. But the best writer out there can take a lecture to their writing and rise once again.
But, like I said, I enjoyed it very much so. Impeicable to impose on writing =) - Report As Spam
- Maemi_Irie - 05/08/2010
- >.> Excuse me but this is a poem and it is in poetry and lyrics.
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- StrikeFreedomX10 - 05/07/2010
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wrong arena
poetry arena!
automatic 1/5 - Report As Spam
- Katy1Cat - 03/19/2010
- I love it!
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- vampire_melanie2000 - 03/08/2010
- dude, it rymes and everything! what could possible make it better!! n-n
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