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I was waist high in clear and shimmering water.Jade was across from me,showing off a toothy smile.The sun gloomed over the horizon,shedding streaks of golden out onto the water.Fish shimmered across the top.A sharp pain hit my chest.I gasped for air.My head was reeling,and I felt dizzy.Jade looked absolutely horrified.I looked down.There it was.A blade, pierced through my chest cavity,gleaming with blood.Droplets fell off into the water.I felt myself collapsing,but there was nothing I could do.I was going to die,and I knew it.
I felt like I was flying.I was soaring away from our dieing Earth.I was losing my grip on life.
As I was dieing I remembered my mother.So bright.Her black hair flowed down to her waist.She had died two years ago.I was in the car with her.A tall black truck came speeding forward.A head on collision.My mother died,but I was stuck being tortured by the haunting memories of sitting by my mothers cold body while I remained.Thinking back on this,it brought tears to my eyes.I could not cry,but my feelings swelled up inside.
- by humdudgeon |
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- | Submitted on 05/30/2010 |
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- Title: The Dream
- Artist: humdudgeon
- Description: uuum,well,it's something I've once felt.It's like your losing control of yourself,and watch while people stare at your failure.
- Date: 05/30/2010
- Tags: dream
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Comments (2 Comments)
- VampirePretzel - 06/02/2010
- Good Vocab, but the full stops were in the wrong places
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- heartlikesin - 05/30/2010
- It's a supergreacoolio idea!! Work on your grammar and spacing and all that stupid stuff ><;; and this would be amazing!! Maybe lengthen it out a little bit, add flashbacks and memories. 3/5!!
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