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(Part One)
It was one of those nights again. Those nights when the stars seek refuge in the heavens
and their mother, the moon, retires early to slumber. The wind danced and intertwined
between the tall cedar trees, singing soft melancholy melodies into the night. The forest
awakened underneath the slumbering sky. The owls called, the bushes trembled, and the
shadows began to play. Amidst the darkness the silhouette of a young woman approached
a small clearing, curtained by a battalion of trees, a woman of unspeakable beauty, beauty
that dispersed the darkness. Her large emerald eyes scanned the clearing warily, the
ink tendrils that framed her delicate tanned face swayed with the movement. She sat and
waited, a tiny smile pinned on her rosy lips. Normally a traveler wouldn’t dare step foot
into Hoia Baciu at night, in fear of the spectators, demons, and ghosts that supposedly
lurked the obscurity, as it has been said in the eerie tales of the family elders. But the
woman sat in confidence, no trace of fear in her convivial expression. A familiar jolly
whistle pierced the night’s song, and the woman’s smile matured into a grin. Through the
outline of the trees stepped a fellow, whose appearance rivaled the arc angel Gabriel; a
masculine chap crowned with a golden mane. He strode to the woman, whispering sweet
words of affection and gave her a long awaited embrace. They held each other, under the
dark sky, and under the omniscient eyes of God. Their love was an enigma, despite how
divine and passionate it had become, it was confined to stay in the shadows; the alluring
tawny woman and her adversary turned lover defiled the laws of society, a whimsical tale
of forbidden love.
To the blond, blue-eyed Aryan children of Germany, Gypsies were filthy thieving
vagabonds, while to the gypsies, the feared Wehrmacht solders, were the minions of
Satan.
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As the Nazi tyranny spread across Europe like a plague, German authorities targeted,
rounded up, and slaughtered minorities, groups of people who were deemed inferior,
blemishes to the Aryan race. On one occasion, General Aurel Kurtz led a small brigade of
soldiers to round up a band of gypsies on the outskirts of Hungary. They arrived
under the cover of night, like wolves on the prowl. In the shadows they approached the
unsuspecting camp and with a simple nod General Kurtz released his pack of 60 men to
begin the assault; the merry jingle of the Roma people soon turned into a ballad of
horror-filled wails. General Kurtz watched the raid with interest. These people, these
condemned wretches, made no attempt to fight. They merely let themselves be captured,
no resistance, a note the General could not quite comprehend. He watched his men
rummage through the caravan, and kill the brawny horse that pulled it, tossing the
Roma’s possessions onto the ground with no remorse. He watched as they mercilessly
beat the elders with smiles on their faces; and the violate a defenseless blind woman. He
merely stood and watched the cruelty, not once breaking his steely exterior; it was how he
was trained.
Guilt was branded as a sign of weakness, and the weak were preyed upon in the military.
A lesson he learned when he spent his days as a private. A sudden shriek of a woman
caught the General’s attention. His Lieutenant came from behind the wagon hauling a
young woman by the hair, her face hidden behind cloth. She screamed, and unlike her
family fought with all her might, her efforts were rewarded when she managed to knee
the lieutenant in the groin. As he crumpled to the ground in agony, the general expected
the gypsy woman to run, abandoning her clan, to save her life. Gypsy people were
barbarians; they cared only for their own pathetic life. So he has been told. But she
surely proved him wrong when she turned and scrambled to pull a soldier off an old
woman, she lashed out at him like a wild cat. Was the woman mad?
Surely she knew she could not overtake the man, a man that was nearly two heads taller,
and a mammoth compared to her petite frame. “Impudent wretch” the officer growled,
striking the audacious woman on the face, she crumbled to the ground in a heap. The
curious eyes of soldiers and troubled glances of the captured Roma, watched the
spectacle in silence. The officer pulled out his rifle in blinded rage, and aimed. The air
grew thick with suspense, reaching to the point where it was almost suffocating. Kurtz
unconsciously drew his own weapon and shot into the air, in attempt to regain order back
into his company. “I gave no orders to take any lives. Compose yourself or you’ll find
yourself tied amongst these people” he cautioned. The addressed officer scowled and
placed his weapon back into its carrier, re-situating himself back at his post “Well then
gentlemen, if you’re done acting like idiots, we should start heading off, Budapest is a
long ways off” Kurtz said. He took a quick glance at the woman that remained still on the
floor, unconscious no doubt. “Carsten get that woman in the back of the truck with the
others!” Kurtz ordered. A lithe younger man pealed around the truck and acknowledged
the General respectively. He had impressively blue eyes and a messy top of wheat
colored hair; he was the youngest amongst them, only at seventeen years of age. Carsten
nodded and picked the woman up, almost too delicately, and placed her in the back of the
truck. He managed to catch a glimpse of the terrified faces of the cargo sitting in the back
as well. Carsten sighed heavily, and gave the general a pained look. Kurtz knew that look
all too well, Carsten was young and innocent, he had yet to be violated with the twisted
nature of war.
The convoy set off to Budapest, 60 men, three trucks, and a very solemn General,
whose mind seemed to dance around the image of a mysterious gypsy woman. He wasn’t
quite sure what interested him more, the fact that she bravely chose to defend her family,
or her piercing jade eyes, eyes that seemed to unravel the soul. She certainly had
admirable traits for a gypsy woman, voluptuous curves, marvelous complexion, and, long
curly dark hair . Kurtz jumped slightly as a hand was placed on his shoulder,
interrupting his musings. “General you haven’t said a word since we left the gypsy camp”
Carsten said; concern in his sky colored eyes. Kurtz tossed the private a small smile, “Be at
ease Carsten, I’m just tired from the trip” he lied, although not entirely convinced the
younger soldier thought it better to leave the General to his thoughts.
- by Oinari Ichigo |
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- | Submitted on 06/20/2010 |
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- Title: Writing on Blank Walls
- Artist: Oinari Ichigo
- Description: A romantic tragedy taking place during the Holocaust.
- Date: 06/20/2010
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Comments (3 Comments)
- ichigo strawberry ichigo - 06/23/2010
- WOW HOW AWESOME write more please ^.^
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- Potato - 06/23/2010
- Wow, Inari. That was really, really, really good. I really wanna read more of this and I can't wait till you have more. WWII is one of my favorite things to read and write about. Ohh- I can't wait! Keep me updated! 5 stars, love!
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- dancinginshadow - 06/23/2010
- Very good!! I like it! Keep writing!
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