Seventh Grade (Edited) Gary S.

• Artist: iixxLaurenxxii
• Description: For Mr.Curiales 7th grade 6th period class.
  (Micheal Torres Likes Teresa)
  1st version by Gary Soto
• Date: 07/01/2010
• Tags: edited english

Part 1.
Victor: Look at that girl across the cafeteria.
Micheal: Yeah she's cute. I think her name is Teresa. I'm gonna go talk to her.
Victor: scream I saw her first!! *throw punches Micheal*
Micheal: evil So what! You always get he girls!! *gives Victor a bloody nose*
Principal: Break it up you two!! Detention!
Both: *pointing at each other* he did it!
Teresa: Idiots rolleyes
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At Detention after school.
Mean teacher: SIT DOWN AND NO TALKING! *scratches chalkboard*
All kids: *whispers ow*
N/A: Teresa walks in.
Mean Teacher: Ms. Valez, what a suprise to see you.
Teresa: I uh blew a bubble in french.
Mean Teacher: Oh well, sit where ever.
Teresa: *sits next to victor* rolleyes Losers.
*Bell rings*
Mean teacher: Detention dismissed.





Part two coming soon! Message me for a trailer

Comments

[iixxLaurenxxii]

Yteah wel this is what i deid for class

[lakelurk]

Doesn't matter. This is Gary Soto's, not yours.

[iixxLaurenxxii]

um well it was my own work we did this for english and i can write it how i want so stfu

[Miss Rubber Duck]

What the hell. You stole this from Gary Soto.
It is clearly stated on the 'submit' page that you should only submit your own original work.
And not only that, you ruined an EXCELLENT short story.

[iixxLaurenxxii]

http://www.gaiaonline.com/arena/writing/fiction/vote/?entry_id=102213365#title

[cutie_vamp_22]

more!