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Prologue
Agent Snickerdoodle Black
It was hot. Unbearably hot. The sand beneath me seemed devoid of moisture, the air around me was crisp and warm as an oven. I needed water, or I would die. But just trying to stand made me feel as if I was on my deathbed. I opened my mouth and yelled. I cursed Doctor Meflin for sending me out to the desert. "Important mission" my foot. She just wanted me to waste away in these God-forsaken lands. Finally, to punctuate my anger, I let out an animalistic cry and let my eyes roll up in my head. The scream rang still in the open, blazing sky.
Chapter 1
Doctor Wendy Meflin
I sat back in my chair and checked off Agent Black's name. She wasn't quite dead yet, probably, but setting her off on a "mission" was a foolproof plan to get rid of her. Good. Agent Black was a very important member of this organization, and if I wanted to have control over this place, I had to remove any obstacles in my path.
"Doctor Meflin, you look sort of tired. Would you like a coffee?"
Robert, AKA Captain Echnos. He was another on the hitlist. He was one of seven people left, including Agent Black. It was a bit painful to have to kill him, he was a very nice person, but power was -is- everything.
"No thank you, Captain," I said. "I'm fine." He stared at me one last time in an almost suspicious manner -did he suspect me? If so, I must be sure to obliterate him all the more quickly- and then left my office.
I smiled to myself and made a little note on my list. Only seven more...
- by InvidiaDiaboli |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 03/11/2011 |
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- Title: The Hit List
- Artist: InvidiaDiaboli
- Description: Ok, that's actually not the title I wanted, but I couldn't think of anything better right now. This is a novel I'm in the making of writing about a secret agency. An agent there, Dr. Wendy Meflin wants to take over. She has a hit list of important members in the agency that she needs to kill in order to achieve her goal, hence the title. Can Agent Black discover Meflin's secret and stop the power-hungry woman, or will she die in the desert like Meflin wants?
- Date: 03/11/2011
- Tags: hitlist
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Comments (2 Comments)
- Weary_Highelf - 03/19/2011
- This is more or less a concept. I consider actually writing more then a paragraph and calling it a chapter. So far, it's... sub-par. Hit the books and try again, go for a bit more then a few sentances.
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- dDzzjSklRff - 03/11/2011
- Amazing creative language and well thought out story... 5/5 biggrin
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