i dont feel it

• Artist: xXxKiss_Me_GoodbyexXx
• Description: i've been feeling so numb lately, my memories practically nothing more than a minuet for every week
• Date: 11/23/2008
• Tags: dont feel

Hurt me,
beat me,
abuse me,
I don't feel it

Love me,
treasure me,
help me'
I don't hear it

Toss me around,
leave me,
kill me,
I don't care

Lately there is nothing to hold on to
lately nothing seems worth the struggle
lately you've been trying,
an example of a wasted effort

Lately you've given up
lately I've let you
lately I've been alone
a trampled effort of normality

Comments

[JustAPoisonApple]

It is a good idea, however it needs some work. Mainly editing, commas, periods (full-stops for the dense poeples) and capitals. Keep trying.

[h0ttgrandma33]

Everybody feels this way at times.

[skullbleeder]

wow. thats deep. ive been feeling that way for over a year. thank u 4 putting it in2 words.

[Taju]

i feel this way sometimes but other times it hard to get out of it hope you feel better

[arceus6296]

i feel like that too.well used to.

[Lord Booty Game]

I feel this way sometimes, memories slipping, and fading to dust, i hope you feel better....i honestly do, because, we don't deserve to feel this way....