Who Am I?

• Artist: DarkRain2007
• Description: This was written to explain my deepest thoughts to myself. I was at a very rough spot in my life when I wrote this, and I believe it is my best work. Please rate, comment, and be honest about it.
• Date: 07/16/2008
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Above all things on this Earth,
I fear the chaos of my own mind,
My own thoughts.
If I can't trust the inner me,
Who can I trust?
If I'm afraid to show others the real me,
Will I ever realize my true identity:
The person God intended me to be?

What about me, who am I but a nobody?
My mind can't bear the questions I ask myself,
But if I don't ask them, who will?
Amongst all the questions,
One has reign over them all:
Who am I? :-*

Comments

[ixInfernoxi]

Wow, that's part of how I'm feeling right now.

[Casca 7]

i remember a time when i felt like that. i was 16 and just about everything bad that could happen was happening. it's amazing how hardship can really bring out the best in us though. smile
you're writing could use a little work, but you've got the meat of the idea down.

[Elluta]

love it! ^--^ 10