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River twist,
River slide,
River join,
Stream divide.
River deep,
River cool,
Splashing down,
Into pool.
River run,
River flow,
River pull,
River tow.
River rise,
River flood.
Like the pounding
of my blood.
- by Cathedral Az |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/22/2008 |
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- Title: River
- Artist: Cathedral Az
- Description: I like the rhythm of this one. Sounds like flowing water to me. Thanks for your support, everyone.
- Date: 07/22/2008
- Tags: river water
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Cathedral Az - 07/22/2008
- Awwww. Thanks, Sam
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- mavsgirl - 07/22/2008
- THis one is really good! Its my fav so far, but the crime one is a close second! Keep the poetry comin
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- Cathedral Az - 07/22/2008
- Wow! What a compliment. I'm glad you liked it so much.
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- akuma kawaii - 07/22/2008
- omg, sick!!! (good way) I just played a rhythm on my guitar and sung that and it was so metal XD like, the whispery vocals where it can easily build to a scream (which is what I did at the end) and I can totally make that the chorus of a song biggrin lucky you I currently need a band, so I won't steal it ^_^
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