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Addiction:
She’s online from dawn to dusk
Being on the internet is a must
It’s the only world she trust
Even if it’s filled with hate and lust.
She can be whoever she inspires to be,
On the internet, she can dream free.
On the internet, she is she.
It’s consuming her, but pleasantly.
Chat rooms and forums are her social life,
Where she types into the lonely night
And she creates and dreams away
In an illusion that she’s okay.
But will she ever be okay,
Staying online all night and day?
For her, it’s the only way
To feel happy, complete, or okay.
And all her music comes from their,
Whether it be rock or preppy flair,
The music from Youtube consumes the room,
Drowning out all the sadness and gloom.
Music is what keeps her going on,
Even if it’s a sad depressing song,
At least it’s something, at least its noise,
To save her from the forces that destroys.
So she’ll stay online all day,
Rather than go outside and play,
At least here she can say what she needs to say.
On the web, she can have her way.
Pages like Gaia and Neopets,
Where virtual reality drowns all regrets,
Where an avatar is what you are,
Where you be yourself and still be star,
Where you can just delete all the teasing,
Where you can say things that are God pleasing,
Without having to face the real world,
But the computer the only thing that’s real
For this girl.
- by -RazzberryWerewolfPoet- |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 08/03/2008 |
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- Title: Addiction
- Artist: -RazzberryWerewolfPoet-
- Description: Some people wonder why we spend all day typing on the computer, all day fixed in virtual reality. I don't know why you do it, but this is why I live on the internet.
- Date: 08/03/2008
- Tags: computer addiction rejection acceptance bliss
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Comments (7 Comments)
- LawliUchiha - 06/28/2009
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I think i love you.
Thats as close to perfect as it gets. I <3 it 5/5 - Report As Spam
- crazy_life247 - 04/30/2009
- You are awesome at doing this kind of stuff!! It's so true that you can say how you feel on this web.
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- Sexi_Pyro_Angel - 04/30/2009
- i love it that is exactly how i feel!!!!
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- S h i z z l e P o p s - 01/04/2009
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OMG!
I love it!! That is so me. It is a awsome poem! 10/5 - Report As Spam
- PinkFire07 - 12/24/2008
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i like it a lot!
The ryhmes make everything sound so powerful and complete.
Great Job! smile
And this poem is so realistic! - Report As Spam
- Pressure Sensative - 12/18/2008
- I like parts of it, but in other places they rhyme scheme is really extremely forced... 2/5
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- onionio - 12/14/2008
- I agree, you do have natural talent. Or maybe it's not natural, and you just work really hard. Either way, you write beautiful poems. Just be more aware of grammer and such. 5/5
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