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War is War
War has been a population's bane and will always be,
War has been because of hatred of one person,
War has been unnecessary but one person has created it,
War has been over land when it could have been discussed over tea.
Peace is what people want,
Peace is God's happiness,
Peace is what that ONE person has not heard of,
Peace is... Happiness what all world has been wanting and those people promised to cherish it.
- by SolidSnake119 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 10/09/2008 |
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- Title: War Is War
- Artist: SolidSnake119
- Description: Our homework was to write a poem about peace. So I just thought that putting it up here would be cool
- Date: 10/09/2008
- Tags: peace poetry
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Comments (5 Comments)
- SolidSnake119 - 10/09/2008
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but u see..,
we didnt discuss it
she just said to write a peace poem! at the time we were disscussing scary stories
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- findulias - 10/09/2008
- Right i dont want to upset anyone but here goes... The reason your teacher liked this is because it is so predictible. It barely counts as a poem as you obviously are just listing ideas mentioned in the classroom. This is a real shame as you obviously have potential. I would channel it into something more constructive- sure, give your teacher this but work on real poems in your spare time. I wouldent have commented if you didnt have potential, and i beleive everybody does.
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- sarah068 - 10/09/2008
- that's so cool
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- Hyper Lauren - 10/09/2008
- thats really good!
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- SolidSnake119 - 10/09/2008
- My teacher gave me 3 points when she read this! Feel free to copy this yourself( after you've sent me a little gift!) if you want to make your teacher happy! (copyright under the price of a small gift)
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