Fallen

• Artist: denaliwhi623
• Description: I wrote this during my biology class out of boredom, but the idea has been haunting me for months. The flow is kind of off, but it was written to sound alkward and disjointed, because death is often so.
• Date: 10/10/2008
• Tags: fallen death song dark darkness

Trapped
In an intricate web
From which
A pulsing darkness ebbs

The night is filled
With rain gently falling
And the song of death
Quietly calling

Comments

[Lil sora_1]

i agree very nice so full of emotion for something so short. well to me anyway love it!!!^^

[scitama]

Wow, for being so short, I really liked it. You created a powerful feeling in just a few quick seconds! Nice!!