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The heart
I love a girl who I don’t know if she likes me
So my heart hurts like the sun burning me
I shall in time if she likes me
But till then this is my poem heart
- by Andy of the Vampires |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 10/18/2008 |
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- Title: THE HEART
- Artist: Andy of the Vampires
- Description: this a poem i wrote about to tell how it hurts when you dont know if the person u likes you
- Date: 10/18/2008
- Tags: heart
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Comments (6 Comments)
- Charlie Dorth - 05/05/2010
- Wow....Thats deep man! xD. Nah, I wrote this long ago. Now i'm much mroe literate.
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- xretarded_muffinsx - 02/11/2009
- its god. but yu could use more similies and describe more of how it hurts and why. but not just saying it hurt sbecause. ne like this pain hurts me like a knife in my heart or something. but dont just copy write that. say yu got that idea from me or ill ban you. thankyou. but keep writing ^^ it good
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- -AmazingAlixx- - 01/30/2009
- i know how you feel somtime people dont understand what you wrote cuz they dont no how it feels!^_^
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- Andy of the Vampires - 12/18/2008
- you dont get it people
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- Andy of the Vampires - 12/17/2008
- ik
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