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Why do i feel these things
Its something new
Its something I feel
Only for you
I like your smile
I like your walk
I like our friendship
And when we talk
I know I want you to ask me out
But i don't want you to have any doubt
I like you so much
But I'm afraid to get hurt
I felt that before
They treated me like dirt
There is one thing that hurts me
Something I've waited for you to say
You never told me how you feel
And I've waited everyday
I want to be yours
And i want you to be mine
I like you for who you are
And you are so kind
Please trust me
So i cant trust you
I just want to know
If you feel like i do
So to skip to the point
What I'm trying to say
With the amount of time we talk
I love you more and more everyday
heart
- Title: SOMETHING NEW "trix"
- Artist: TRIX19
- Description: just a little feeling i had for a girl
- Date: 11/10/2008
- Tags: something
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Evyne - 11/20/2008
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This is a stunning poem, probably one of the best i've read in years. You truly are talented young man, so i also think you should keep it up.
I hope the luckly girl is proud of you.
As much as i am.
incredible work, i can't wait till you write another one.
Evyne. <3
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- BITCHFACE1325 - 11/13/2008
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ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
omg dats sooooo sweet!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1 - Report As Spam
- nick0_Chant - 11/13/2008
- That's so cute! Yet so true.. I love it! keep up the Great work!
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- tksunshine93 - 11/12/2008
- It's very good....Good flow....I wasn't surprised with the last stanza but I still like it very much.Good job!!
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