When Your Gone

• Artist: too-lazy-to-write-my-name
• Description: I have no clue if its a song or poem or if the title is the one of a song.I had to write this because scence I know my family dose not love me I was feeling depressed and I tried to cut my veins and the stupied phsycologist made me do a song and poem for my sister and it wont make scence ugh.Oh and tell me if u think is a poem or a song I need to know witch one it is.
• Date: 11/13/2008
• Tags: your gone

You are out of our lifes.You are not by my side.You are lost in Heaven,you are lost in space.But on the night,between the stars I can see your face.You are gone out of sight.You are in another life.And I keep asking myself why dose it has to be this way.You are gone and I know you won't come back.Out of my life like a shooting star,you flyied away from me.But I know you will shine other angels lifes.And it hurts me to know I won't see your smile,for a very long time.And until I die, I won't see your face,or hold you on my embrace.

Comments

[pvt_Pearson]

thats fantastic but u may want to check out my poem ur not alone

[KIWI-NIIJACHAN]

Yes I can totally put this into music and sing it. I like it. Kinda deep! Good job!