Fallen

• Artist: Killvin
• Description: This is a poem I wrote to, and about my girlfriend, Erika... It's not my first poem, but it is my favorite, and it is also my first to be entered into the Arena, please rate, comment, or ignore... I just felt like trying this out! lol
  
  btw, 6th line... new earth, means like new soil... unfamiliar territory... just so it's not confusing anyone...
• Date: 11/15/2008
• Tags: fallen

I have fallen so deep, so deep into love,
My hopes are steep, soaring like the doves...
Because one day, I hope it occurs...
That I'll fly to Minnesota, fly above the birds...
Fly away from my homeland, from the place of my birth,
and to a new land, new climate, new earth...
I no longer wish to be so sullen, filled with the burden of sorrow...
It is my heart which she has stolen, and hers which I have borrowed.
The only way to rid myself of this annoying pain,
is to be where no one can see me cry, to stand out in the rain...
The only one's who know of this pain,
are those who feel exactly the same...
Being so far away from life,
Away from your love, away from your wife...
My confession is that I have fallen in love,
Fallen so far, I can't see the sky above...
I wish to be filled with glee,
Holding my love, for all eternity...
And one day, my wish will come true,
I love you Erika, I hope you know I do...
I'll spend all day, from dawn till dusk...
Thinking of you, doing what I must...
Until that day, when I press my lips upon your face,
And hug you so tightly, your breath I erase...
I love you Erika, I will never stop...
and My hopes of seeing you, they will never drop.

Thank you for reading smile

Comments

[Trusae]

wow that was awesome 5 stars =D

[DeCrazySheep]

I've never been one for the mussy love stuff, but this is pretty good.
I'd have to say that
'My confession is that I have fallen in love,
Fallen so far, I can't see the sky above'
was my favorite line, cause to me what i precive as love is extreamly isolateing and liberating at the same time.
I think (after reading a few more of yours) i'll dig through my book of crappy poems so you can laugh and feel superior.
Cause my friend you are a fine word smith, and you deserve it.

[Foxy_Vampiress]

I like it too my friend. I can see why your fav.

[Killvin]

Thank you for those of you who enjoyed it...

[Jolly Dramaseeker1346]

I stand corrected this is the best poem u have writin! 3nodding I don't feel the same but i still understand u in a different way, but i do hope that one day u'll b with ur love! *hugs* *cries*

[RDK Yuki Rp]

Omg kill thats awesome!

[Kawaii Otaku Kun]

uuhhh! i hate u why do u have 2 b so good?!? DX first danny and now u r makin me jelous! DX