Broken Hearted

• Artist: JUGGERNAUT_VampireofFood
• Description: I'm not that good at writing poems but this is just something i wrote one day when i was feeling very sad.
• Date: 11/27/2008
• Tags: broken hearted love lies torment

I gaze upon the wound
now open
with words in my head
never to be spoken
you broke my heart
with your tormenting lies
now never again will I look into
your eyes
you said you loved me
but was it true
now my heart will forever
be broken in two

Comments

[Queen_Plum]

i agree with vincent_Iscariot_key there isnt anything showing how you feel

[Jenna894]

I LOVE IT
U GET 5

[Vincent_Iscariot_Key]

It does show what you feel; I guess, my poetry is bad and cannot really say, since I never write short poems...but good overall.