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This boy is sick of crying.
This boy is tired of trying.
He may be smiling,
But inside he's dying.
He's rotting away to ashes.
This curse is burning his heart.
He has his own disguise.
He runs and hides in this costume from all the hazards that come near.
He has his own mask.
No one can see through it,
For no one can cure this curse.
He is a smart boy with a fast mind,
But also has a cracked heart.
A heart that cannot contain this kind of pain.
A heart that doesn't want to continue mourning in this agony.
A heart that doesn't want to burn in this acid hurting anymore.
This boy doesn't want people to see this wretched curse.
The only way he survives is with the help of a blade.
It is gleaming and shining,
With his heart's blood dripping on it.
His mask is fading.
This boy is revealed.
But it's too late to save him...
The curse has completed it's task....
- Title: A Curse For A Heart
- Artist: undoings
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Description:
i get these kinda poems popping into my head when i listen to miserable at best by mayday parade....
kinda creepy.... - Date: 11/27/2008
- Tags: curse heart
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Comments (7 Comments)
- C O O K I E H Z - 12/05/2008
- i loved it, sad, and so what if she used a quote (or stole the poem) <-- she didn't. You should be happy to have been able to read such a wonderful poem
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- undoings - 12/05/2008
- one more thing the first part (sick of crying, tired of trying. blah, blah, blah) when i started writing this poem, that whole lil quote thing seemed familiar to me. i didnt know where it was from so i just went like " whatever, hell i'll just write it down". but now, thanks to you guys, i remembered seeing that quote like 2 or so years ago on a youtube profile. sorry everybody, i have the shittiest memory ever and i make retarded mistakes like this one, and sorry the person who made the quote
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- undoings - 12/05/2008
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JEESH PEOPLE!!! GIVE ME A BREAK!! STOP BEING SO CRITICAL AND SPECIFIC AND PICKY!!! THIS IS MY FIRST TIME POSTING MY POEM ON HERE, I HAVE NO IDEA WHAT I'M DOING. I'M JUST RANDOMLY POSTING A POEM UP. I RARELY EVEN WRITE POEMS! (cuz poems arent really my thing)
soo plllllzzzz
stop being a critic
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- undoings - 12/05/2008
- where the ******** did you hear this poem? i wrote this myself with my own heart and mind, so unless someone's been crawling around in my body and stealing and publishing my stuff before i publish it myself, you're a lying b***h
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- Demonic_Rose_Angel - 12/05/2008
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its wat many of us are forced to do
i luv it it kinda describes me - Report As Spam
- crash n burn victim - 12/05/2008
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hey I heard this poem before .
ooo you used someone else's poem . - Report As Spam
- Only Becca - 12/04/2008
- This poem is very descriptive and nicely written. I think the sword could have used a little more introduction and elaboration, but overall a very heartfelt piece. 4/5
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