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This boy is sick of crying.
This boy is tired of trying.
He may be smiling,
But inside he's dying.
He's rotting away to ashes.
This curse is burning his heart.
He has his own disguise.
He runs and hides in this costume from all the hazards that come near.
He has his own mask.
No one can see through it,
For no one can cure this curse.
He is a smart boy with a fast mind,
But also has a cracked heart.
A heart that cannot contain this kind of pain.
A heart that doesn't want to continue mourning in this agony.
A heart that doesn't want to burn in this acid hurting anymore.
This boy doesn't want people to see this wretched curse.
The only way he survives is with the help of a blade.
It is gleaming and shining,
With his heart's blood dripping on it.
His mask is fading.
This boy is revealed.
But it's too late to save him...
The curse has completed it's task....
- Title: A Curse For A Heart
- Artist: undoings
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Description:
i get these kinda poems popping into my head when i listen to miserable at best by mayday parade....
kinda creepy.... - Date: 11/27/2008
- Tags: curse heart
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Curbside_Cyanide - 12/04/2008
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- Slow Monkey - 12/04/2008
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I love this, though i can't help but think, 'Wow, this sounds like me...' ;__;
It ish just amazing ^_^ - Report As Spam
- TheguiltyCancer - 12/04/2008
- i like it expessialy the part that says inside hes dieing nice work
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- DarknessAngel79 - 12/04/2008
- im always righting stuff like that no matter how hapy i am so i think u can go really far with stuff like that if ur anything like i am
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- JeSuSrOx94 - 12/04/2008
- Don't say he's dead cuz you'll make me cry even more for I know that is what happened and always will claim those victims...
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- Luunare - 12/04/2008
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It's good, but the beginning four lines isn't yours. It's on tons of icons and has been for awhile.
[Unless you are the original author of it, then I apologize.]
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- La Petite Mofette - 12/04/2008
- It's a free verse, although even a free verse should at least sound good to the ear, you have an idea going but honestly, you have the longest line tucked in between 2 incredibly short lines, consider the comment Ode-Melody- made, I think she's absolutely right.
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