Dying

• Artist: evilazurea
• Description: this is my poem. I wrote it because I felt like it.
  
• Date: 11/28/2008
• Tags: dying

AS I TAKE MY LAST BREATH
AND WISH FOR DEATH
TO TAKE ME OVER
WHILE DARKNESS JOB IS TO COVER
ALL OVER ME
AND LET ME BE
I CAN FEEL MYSELF DYING
BUT I DONT START CRYING
IM SLOWLY DRIFTING AWAY
TO DARKNESS WHERE I LAY
IM WAITING FOR MY LOVE, YOU
BUT I ALREADY KNEW
YOU WEREN'T GOING TO SHOW UP
SO I DRINK YOUR BLOOD FROM MY CUP
WISHING FOR TO SEE YOUR FACE AGAIN
CAUSE YOU'RE MY MAN
I LOVE YOU
SO BEFORE I DIE SAY I LOVE YOU TOO

Comments

[evilazurea]

Lol ty

[iiSxImLoU]

*reads Kaori-San3's comment* Actually you put it right, where you put your poem and "this is my poem. I wrote it because I felt like it." is not backwards. It says description not poem so you did it right lol. Anyways, your poem is great, I love it.

[evilazurea]

lol ty. Let me fix it. I totally messed up lol

[NebuChi3]

You put it backwards.....your poem was supposed to be where you put "This is my poem I wrote because I felt like it."
lol but other than that, the poem was so, hmm....I can't think of the word....
Vivid!
That's it.
At first, it was sort of confusing, but then it all became clear.

[evilazurea]

ty hun.

[Misa Miyuki]

aww thats awsome hun^^