A little heart

• Artist: Eric_the_shyfox
• Description: Yeah this is my first entery soooo.... i feel really sad so this one is really emo xD but yeah hope you guys enjoy it ^_^
• Date: 11/29/2008
• Tags: little heart

When I awake I know that you'll be there for me....

But your not laying beside me....

I know when I have a bad day you'll kiss me to make me feel better....

But your not home....

I know when I feel alone you'll be there for me....

But you left me....

And now I feel more empty inside without you....

Painting my black heart with red to cover the blackness of my heart....

And tonight I sleep alone....

Feeling the cold side of my pillow as my heart feels cold without your warmth...

And as I lay awake I think of you.....

Waiting....

Dreaming....

Wishing....

Hope that you'll come home to hevan and be my falling angel to save my from dammnation....

And this night will be my last....

For tonight I will not wake....

Because my heart was taken by complete darkness....

Comments

[Zlae]

I love, "Painting my black heart with red to cover the blackness of my heart...." But there's no need to say painting my black heart when you describe it looking black afterwards. It would have sound better with, 'Painting my heart red to cover the blackness of my heart.' In my opinion. Besides that, very nice. 4/5.

[rose-eagels13]

coooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooool

[such my BALLS soo HARD]

ahh how cute you are a good writer

[Eric_the_shyfox]

thank you guys ^_^

[Dominae Dolus]

Wow....I really think this deserves a 5/5
Thanks for entering it

[Nightengail24]

It made me feel sad....but I like it^.^ I would very much like to show you one of my poems,so PM me if you do.5/5

[XX_WILD_CHICK_XX]

LUV IT GOOD JOB