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Sitting in a conner
waiting for you to pull me out
i wait and wait
but you never come
waiting alone no one
has noticed not even you
as soon I noticed you didn't
care I broke in two
one wanting to hold on the
other wanting to let go
and leave forever
I think of this as I'm about
to jump I'm still waiting
for him to pull me out
hes not coming 3..2..1..
I get cut off by a friendly
voice then I'm in shock
still on the edge legs trembling
I slowly fall.... opening my eyes
I see I'm being held by the one i love
hopping this is true i lean in to kiss him
he backs off and leaves the roof top and
once again I'm alone.
- Title: Alone
- Artist: Tinzing
- Description: This is how I feel at the moment comments are wanted. ::D:
- Date: 12/17/2008
- Tags: alone
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Comments (6 Comments)
- Mattlikeshat - 01/17/2009
- keep doing the poems
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- Mattation4ever - 12/29/2008
- omg if im not onlnie for a days or more ill try to tell you bewfore that ok?
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- Tinzing - 12/28/2008
- no its not it was uriel and he was not on for lik 2 days
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- Mattation4ever - 12/28/2008
- this is about me isnt it tinzzing. *cry* i am sorry
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- -Less than Graceful- - 12/22/2008
- Very emotive and powerful. I would congratualte you but seeing the theme of this poem I feel it inappropriate.
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- Infected Monkey - 12/21/2008
- oh i see now
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