life is a warl wind

• Artist: XDIm _A_DorkXD
• Description: what life is ^_^
• Date: 01/11/2009
• Tags: somthingrememrable

life takes turns like horses racing, raceing for there lives. ever turn is painfull but the trudge on hopeing, hopeing for freedom of this pain. searching ,searching for happyness in a life of desperation
looking elgant to those who can see what they truly are even when there so tired out that the fall, fall deep with in them selfs. wakeing the next day to trudge on again painfull but blessfull to have air in there lungs to keep trudgeing. every step painfull but hope, hope feels there lungs makes them run maeks them who they are. so they run.....

Comments

[PoisonousMoonlight]

It's not whether you can read it. It's what it looks like. Different things appeal to different people. Usually in writing people prefer, capitalized, spell checked, grammar edited work. I don't mind them but it's just for your future reference.
Except constructive criticism. Besides I liked it, don't forget add -ing drop the e/y.
I hope you have a wonderful writing career. :] 4/5 for the thought and consideration.

[XDIm _A_DorkXD]

for you info u can read every word of that.. so don't complain because i made small spelling errors that's moronic..

[Annastaysia]

eepzorz learn to spell xp

[Youre_A_Dork]

uh cool biggrin