A Girl At The Mirror

• Artist: DARKSIDELONEWOLF
• Description: Um this is my first time putting my poem on gaia
  I never show my work because people think im not good enough.
  I write poems from my dark cold heart.
  My friends said im good but i dont know
  so I leave u to judge
  Im not good as other people who write great poems
  this poem pop in my head one night
  I was bored XD
• Date: 01/20/2009
• Tags: girl mirror

when i look at a mirror. I see this beautiful girl at my side

her eyes was so beautiful as like sparkle cystal

she was so beautiful like a angel from heaven above

I was wondering why she was at my side

then i close my eyes and open my eyes

she was at my side in real life

I look at her and i blush and I got shy

When she speak to me. her voice was sweet and smooth. my heart started to beat fast when she hold my hand. she said i was special and i was different then other guys.

I think this was a dream but it wasnt

I hold her close in my arms and didnt want to let her go because she was special

I was in love with her and she was in love with me

then we kiss each other and we know we going be together forever

it was love in first sigh and she was mine

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Comments

[SingingSuperstar98]

that is beautiful!! <3

[NostaIgia]

All I can say is that this isn't good at all... it doesn't represent poetry at all, nor does it rhyme (which is okay.)
But you're not painting a very good picture, because it sounds like you're summarizing your day or something.
Ahemm, anyway; it needs work. And lots of it. 2/5.

[Rhode-sama]

So Romantic. You're good at making poem Dark-nii ^_^ keep up the good work 8D

[III emo-fox III]

all i got to say is very nice

[ninja of Persia]

very nice

[xXxToxicatedSoulxXx]

Who ever that girl is she must be lucky to have u xD and i know u were bored, u get bored a lot xD lol and you should keep writing, who cares what others say. it's ur own style not theirs