Time:a finish it poem

• Artist: Lola_Bunny8696
• Description: i do not know how to finish it so..
  when you comment u can finish it urself i'll decide which one i like the best and
  i will give you the prize of ur choice
• Date: 01/24/2009
• Tags: timea finish poem

Time just seems to flicker by
life is just so short
time just seems to fly away
from anything or anyone
clocks just seem to make noise
time is there no matter what
time just seems to rush on by...........

Comments

[Lola_Bunny8696]

that sounds cool but i wanna look at other ppls ideas before i pick urs

[nickypoitras]

I like it. and i think it should end like this:

the time that i am without u,
i would die.