elizabeth

• Artist: regular jones
• Description:
• Date: 02/25/2009
• Tags: elizabeth

thinking of you hurts so bad.
i want you back beside me.
but the only thing that could
tear us apart has interfeard.
i want to kill the sleeping driver
that pushed you off the bridge.
i want to jup in and save you.
but its too late death took you away.
im left alone to cry late at night
seeing picturs of you dance though my mind.
i want this pain to go away i know it never will.
untill death takes me along,
ill never see you again.

Comments

[Monokuro No Yume]

If you're not willing to use a little bit of time on a piece to capitalize the words I don't see why I should use my time to read it. =_=
Even so, I did; I see something that I feel is overdone and brings nothing new or even interesting to compensate on that.
2/5.

[meerodi]

this is sad! crying even though it didn't rhyme (which poems don't have too) and you spelt alot of words wrong, I still think this poem is really sweet, in a sad kinda way. I loved it