my poems

• Artist: skitty111
• Description: poems
• Date: 03/06/2009
• Tags: poems

Who am i...
What am i ...
What do i do.
Im nothing like you .
I dont have a crew a gang
Im nothing like you

Comments

[Savior_of_the_Red_Moon]

I like it, think i understand the crew part. could it be that you're writing this to someone who is with a gang and that you deny being like them because of they're moral shortcomings? well it's a nice start, you should go into more depth on how else you are not like this person and you definition of yourself to separate yourself from this other person. 4/5

[kittycatg11]

hey this was ok till u added i dont have a crew [a gang]