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The Fallen angel sings,
Of such undying things,
Diamonds fall upon her wings,
As she sings
People say love is undying,
This angel sings of love,
That love is like a dove,
it is fragile and weak,
but it somehow
seems to sneak
into our souls...
- by Sweet Kicks XIX |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 03/28/2009 |
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- Title: The Fallen angel sings...
- Artist: Sweet Kicks XIX
- Description: about a fallen angel... made it up at school...
- Date: 03/28/2009
- Tags: fallen angel
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- Notsuki guinea pig - 04/04/2009
- Don't force yourself to rhyme. It makes it sound worse. The last bit is good....fix the rhyming parts and make it sound fluent.
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- Eclipse13579 - 04/02/2009
- That last bit was pretty good. You shouldn't stretch for a rhyme, so here's my advice. This is a great subject to take a more philosphical take on. Dig a little deeper for those perfect descriptions, and don't force yourself to rhyme.
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