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On a clear night
I saw the star
It streaked through the sky
Calling me, Telling me to wish
So I prayed with all my heart
And the star blinked in its promising way
But what i did not know
Was that the star would. . . .
Take my wish and twist it around
Make me feel weak, and want to fall to ground
The cruelty displayed in that cold, clear night
Is something I can't forget, an evil fight
So now i wish I had never wished
Upon a star that was oh-so-merciless
For I am worse off than I was before
I am left to clean up my own mess
And this torture I have been through
Is a lesson well learned
Because now I know that when you want something
It is better if that thing is earned.
- by Buttercup Veela |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 03/30/2009 |
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- Title: Stars Of Fate
- Artist: Buttercup Veela
- Description: On a cold, merciless night, filled with ominous clouds and a biting wind, I made a wish. I saw a shooting star and I only wanted one thing. But it was more trouble than it was worth to attain it. I got it, but I got the consequences that followed as well. *sigh*
- Date: 03/30/2009
- Tags: stars fate
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Comments (5 Comments)
- Buttercup Veela - 04/14/2009
- ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥ thnx! ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥
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- 290DarkStars - 04/13/2009
- B-e-A-Utiful, and true! you got that perfect rythem nailed down... Great Poem Summer! keep up the good work! mrgreen
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- Aryain Flames - 04/09/2009
- aww, beautiful!!! i almost made me cry...6/5!!!
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- UnConCeivAble - 03/31/2009
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Hey It Rhymes Too! biggrin
I Like the Emotion.
Very Nice. - Report As Spam
- dreamerlove8 - 03/30/2009
- it's really a nice poem a deep one shows sum feeling.
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