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I was waiting under the shade,
until the sun started to fade.
The thorns around my heart,
wished we could restart.
I'm alone in this place,
cornered in a little space.
Then it started to rain,
and she washed away all my pain.
I felt the leaves,
rustling in the air.
I felt her hand,
brushing through my hair.
Then she started letting go,
I caught her and I said "no".
Under her favourite tree,
she finally smiled at me.
- Title: Foliage
- Artist: challen08
- Description: Something I made when I was missing her smile, hope you guys like it. pls comment and rate thanks!!!!
- Date: 05/07/2009
- Tags: foliage
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Comments (5 Comments)
- XxKitty_of_DeathxX - 04/15/2010
- i love this its awesome thats really all i can say im all out of poetic words and good comments to lol sorry
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- challen08 - 05/09/2009
- glad you liked it hahah thanks for the comment!!
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- justamanda325 - 05/09/2009
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i like the last part =)
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- challen08 - 05/08/2009
- thanks! hahah
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- jlp06 - 05/07/2009
- It's beautiful.
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