I Have an Answer

• Artist: onionio
• Description:
• Date: 06/05/2009
• Tags: have answer

I have an answer to your questions,
A reply to your demands
I am not who you wish me to be
For I break at no one’s hands

You can tell me to behave
And I’ll writhe beneath my skin
Tell me that I’m disturbed
And my wrath will just begin

I am no one but myself
I have nothing to hide
I’ll pretend not to be something else
For I have no other side

My bleak and morbid life
Is portrayed throughout my words
I’ll give you something happy
When I hear the songs of birds

Comments

[MJgwarrocker66]

good point of view on the dark side of life. nice. 5/5. read my poems and let me know what you think.

[ABloodyWonder]

RAWR IM A TACO

[xXDragovian-SageXx]

cute picture morbid words.

[Vintage Iove]

Lol alright,I hardly ever see anything on here that's any good, But I like your writing and that other user, It's Julia btw [You said Julie, just making sure so you don't search the wrong name.] I'll look at your submissions tomorrow. [:

[onionio]

I've written enough for one night, but I'll submit more tomorrow. I haven't read anything by Julie Dream, but I'll go check out her work. smile

[Vintage Iove]

Ohhh, Lol It's okay, well I can't wait to read your new work when your done [: Btw have you read any poem's from the user Julia Dream? Your writing kind of reminded me of her's when I was reading something of yours, Just a different style though..

[onionio]

This wasn't a response to your comments. It was more of a reaction to my family’s objection to my morbid ideas. I love all comments and am in no way offended by any of them. I am currently attempting what you suggested, and embracing different emotions to display in my writing. I am greatly sorry for the misunderstanding.