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I try and get ready for something big,
But all I think about is you
You, your image fills my eyes and mind
I have loved you so much
But you did returned the feelings,
No, you never wanted to because she filled your mind,
Not me
Even if we weren't a couple
I would still loved to be your friend
But no,
Being friends wasn't want you had in mind
You tormented me by talking about her,
By how much you love her and how well you treat her
You could see the pain in my eyes as you talked about her but,
You didn't care
My heart hurts so much because I'm looking at you
The bell rings and we get up
Your mouth opens to say something, but you don't say a word
I blink back tears and say,
"Goodbye"
I walk out of the room and leave you behind
I leave you behind like how you left me behind once
That will be the last thing I ever say to you
That will be the last goodbye
- by algidwriter |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 06/10/2009 |
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- Title: The Last Goodbye
- Artist: algidwriter
- Description: Times goes by but feelings don't change. This is what you will remember me by.
- Date: 06/10/2009
- Tags: last goodbyeloveromancesadcouple
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Comments (1 Comments)
- onionio - 06/13/2009
- Your poem didn't flow very well. It sounded like you were just whining about petty things. Some lines I liked, but others were wordy and added no value to the piece. Keep practicing and I wish you the best.
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