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I was born with a blindfold over my eyes
I never did see the shades of the sky.
Blue was the only thing I knew
The clouds were white, but never a hue
I saw but I did not look.
I glanced but I never noticed.
I used to see the shells of things,
But not the truth within.
Now I think about this cover,
If it should be there
I wonder if the world I see
Really is so bare.
I take the blindfold off my eyes,
And gasp at what I see.
The clouds are now a lovely pink
The sky a burning red.
The sun is now glowing orange
As it prepares to go to bed.
Now I know what I've been missing.
The colors of the world.
So if we take our blindfolds off
We will see the earth as is.

- Title: Seeing the world
- Artist: Rinku-Chi
- Description: My friend has a motto. Which makes me want my own. I came up with one. Heres a little poem that sorta fit with it. No mean comments please. But criticism is welcome. Sorry for the weird rhyming patterns (Rhyming one verse, not another)
- Date: 08/22/2009
- Tags: seeing world
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- ProfessorKC - 08/28/2009
- Some people are sticklers on form, but this is fine dor what it is ... not bad at all.
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