broken hearted (edited)

• Artist: l-Phagnomenal-l
• Description: an edited version of an older poem
• Date: 09/09/2009
• Tags: today edited

i have no reason to be
you have all the right

i cant stand to see you with her
you cant tell i even care

i fall apart at the sound of your name
you smile like nothings wrong

i am broken hearted
your madly in love

i think about you every minute of every day
and i bet i dont even cross your mind

Comments

[The Real little angel]

I like it

[Rainbow Miasma]

I like it, but there's no capital letters where there should be. T^T 'I' is always capitalized.. 4/5.

[nerdydork411]

wow, thats sad
wats the old version's name,i think i want to read it