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The flames of passion,
Forever lick,
With their many tongues,
At my heart,
Brewing a potent poison of love,
With a pink haze,
Filling the innermost chambers of my dead,
Beating,
Heart...
- by XxRaven KnightxX |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 09/23/2009 |
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- Title: The Poison of Passion
- Artist: XxRaven KnightxX
- Description: Sorry, once again, no concept art for this one yet drawn...This has to be the most oddly styled poem I've written yet...
- Date: 09/23/2009
- Tags: poison passion
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- Macabre_Words - 09/24/2009
- It's completely beyond me as to why your work doesn't get full scores. 5/5 ^^
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- Doctor Jax - 09/23/2009
- Wow. This is a very short, but interesting poem. I like it. It has a certain type of simplicity that makes it easy to understand. It also leaves a bit of room to play around with its meaning a bit, as well...
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