A Friend To Me

• Artist: Roixis
• Description: Simple poem I wrote in school. I got 100% + 100% because how good it was. =o
• Date: 10/10/2010
• Tags: friend love poem poetry afriendtome

A friend to me→
Is someone that everyone needs
A friend to me→
Is that special one
A friend to me→
Is someone you tell EVERYTHING
A friend to me→
Is someone you never lie to
A friend to me→
Can be a boy or a girl
A friend to me→
Is someone that is always their
A friend to me→
Will always listen to you
A friend to me→
Always has input to give
A friend to me→
Will never leave you in the dust
A friend→
Will help you through the thick and the thin
A friend to me→
Will always stand by your side
A friend to me→
Will never let you down
A friend to me→
Is someone everyone needs
What would you do if you didnt have a friend?

Comments

[Utiai]

I Lovey It <3 5/5

[Nyappy Poppo]

poetry is not about the fancy words and rhyming, it doesn't matter how old the writer sounds, becuase poetry is all about the flow of what the author is trying to say from the depths of their heart... to me anyway, but i really liked it, it was really thoughtful, to really think about what u find in a friend ^^ good job.
i give u a 4, just cuz i really like poems that are done on ur own spare time :3

[Roixis]

wow you much be the stereo type.. my poem is free verse.. no rhyme scheme... it's not a normal poem like most are.. most are 4 lines 5 stanzas -. -

[NakedJack]

It's repetitive, so sounds like something a 10 year old would write. No imagery, no literary techniques were used at all. It's just not good. Your teacher has very low expectations. lol